Here's a dropbox link to my book layout. The bio needs to change. I got a little silly with it. Some parts aren't bad so I'm leaving it until I can come back to it. Any thoughts on a title, would be great!
I did post these in Dropbox but I'll put them here as well, just for good measure. Title suggestions... I'm just going to rattle off words that come to mind Dreamy Enticing Crystals Floral Flower Organic Raw
Pulled out the Thesaurus, here are some other words for those things... phantasmagoric musing daydreaming alluring enchanting inviting efflorescent budding herbaceous elevated Natural Idk if I had to think go something off the top of my head... I like the idea of "The Enchanted Forest" Kind of a play between childhood and adulthood. It's enticing.. like were stepping into the enchanted forest for adults. Kind of works because many of the images have a dreamy whimsical fairytale like feel to them. Thats all I got for ya
Bio- I know you said it needed some work,but I think you're going in the right direction. Just remember the bio doesn't have to be about your work, it's more about you as a person/artist. Although if that is apart of what makes you, you go for it!! I love how you say normalish. Just as a suggestion don't say the devil got ahold of you. Its obvious to me that you're being sarcastic but some people might actually think and agree with that. Consider telling people what D&D is, not everyone will know what it is. Artist Statement- I would put your 2nd paragraph first. Last sentence of first paragraph should have a . not , 2nd paragraph I'd reword this sentence: I needed to push through the political overtones that marijuana carries, so others could enjoy the beautiful aspects of this plant. I love the addition of page numbers!! It allows for a good reference point. The location of them however, changes half way thru which bothers me. I like them much better in the bottom corner. The book is a bit long in my opinion, and I know it's our fault for telling you to add all these images back in. Here is a list of your weaker ones or ones that are similar enough that you could possibly comb thru: 11/15 20/28 31 45 Those are my suggestions! (:
I did post these in Dropbox but I'll put them here as well, just for good measure.
ReplyDeleteTitle suggestions...
I'm just going to rattle off words that come to mind
Dreamy
Enticing
Crystals
Floral
Flower
Organic
Raw
Pulled out the Thesaurus, here are some other words for those things...
phantasmagoric
musing
daydreaming
alluring
enchanting
inviting
efflorescent
budding
herbaceous
elevated
Natural
Idk if I had to think go something off the top of my head...
I like the idea of "The Enchanted Forest"
Kind of a play between childhood and adulthood. It's enticing.. like were stepping into the enchanted forest for adults. Kind of works because many of the images have a dreamy whimsical fairytale like feel to them.
Thats all I got for ya
Bio- I know you said it needed some work,but I think you're going in the right direction. Just remember the bio doesn't have to be about your work, it's more about you as a person/artist. Although if that is apart of what makes you, you go for it!! I love how you say normalish. Just as a suggestion don't say the devil got ahold of you. Its obvious to me that you're being sarcastic but some people might actually think and agree with that. Consider telling people what D&D is, not everyone will know what it is.
Artist Statement- I would put your 2nd paragraph first.
Last sentence of first paragraph should have a . not ,
2nd paragraph I'd reword this sentence: I needed to push through the political overtones that marijuana carries, so others could enjoy the beautiful aspects of this plant.
I love the addition of page numbers!! It allows for a good reference point. The location of them however, changes half way thru which bothers me. I like them much better in the bottom corner.
The book is a bit long in my opinion, and I know it's our fault for telling you to add all these images back in. Here is a list of your weaker ones or ones that are similar enough that you could possibly comb thru:
11/15
20/28
31
45
Those are my suggestions! (: